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In "A Letter to the Editor" by David Rockwood, he argues that wind power "is based on fantasy rather than fact." He disagrees that setting up wind power to generate electricity would be a bad idea. I agree with his argument because Rockwood states in the second paragraph "wind energy would be unavailable - either in no wind situations or in severe blizzard conditions, which would shut down the generators." I agree, with putting the generators in the mountains by Oregon or Washington, would create problems with the area. The generators are going to take up too much room, they are 100-200 feet tall, and would be costly. The generators with the big props also kill the birds, just a side note.
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Chapter 2 page 32-33 discusses the concept of freewriting. Freewriting is "nonstop writing or sustained writing" where you write whatever about whatever. Basically you just put your pen to a piece of paper and write about the first thing that comes to your mind. "Many freewriters find themselves running out of ideas in 3-5 minutes, but if this happens just sit there and write over and over I'm stuck or this is stupid until you get an idea." I have to agree with what they're saying. Sometimes freewriting can get you a good story or just a laugh.
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Concept 6 on page 41 in Chapter 2 talks about a strong thesis statement surprises readers with something new or challenging. "Thus a strong usually contains an element of uncertainty, risk, or challenge." A strong thesis statement lets the reader know what to expect in the paper. A reader can already tell that they are going to like or dislike the topic of the paper by the thesis statement.
Good thoughts on these chapters. I try to avoid putting too many rules down when it comes to your writing - although, for each essay, I'll usually include a list of elements that make up an effective essay (depending on what genre of essay we're working on). I'm usually looking for those things in your essays, but it's by no means meant to be a rule you have to follow. And if you ever are working on an essay and feel like you might want to do something that you think might be a little out there, I'm always willing to talk about it and work with you on making it work in your paper.
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